Great work Nitesh.... a couple of comments. I would ride the music level up a bit for the music change towards the end as the vibe of the music suits perfectly but it's like you haven't committed to the choice of music cos the level is too low. We need to hear it to go on the change journey with you.
Also, I'm not sure about the sepia.... it may work if it was toned down a bit and not so brown..... perhaps a straight b&w would work equally well.
Eitherway, love the story! So good to see you following your passion.
Great work Nitesh.... a couple of comments. I would ride the music level up a bit for the music change towards the end as the vibe of the music suits perfectly but it's like you haven't committed to the choice of music cos the level is too low. We need to hear it to go on the change journey with you.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm not sure about the sepia.... it may work if it was toned down a bit and not so brown..... perhaps a straight b&w would work equally well.
Eitherway, love the story! So good to see you following your passion.